EVA: The page asks visitors to choose a package before it explains what they get. Let’s show the outcome first.

SUE: I can change that order. I’ll keep the existing form and check how the layout behaves on a phone.

ZOE: I’ll prepare the revised copy and image options together, with their sources and version labels.

AMY: Then I’ll check the actual page. A clearer promise still needs evidence, and the mobile form still needs to work.

LIZ: The recommendation is simple: explain the benefit first, then ask for the choice. I’ll bring back the revised page and the checks.